‘‘Hey , don`t you dare call me fat , Jane or I will start calling you Jane with a wild mane.’’ Now it was Jane`s turn to be angry .‘HOW DARE YOU !’ roared Jane .
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‘‘Hey! don't you dare call me fat or I will start calling you Jane with a wild mane!’’
Now it was Jane's turn to be angry. “HOW DARE YOU!” roared Jane .


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