please check my invitation letter

Dear Student,
Make the following changes
1. On the occasion of 'the' wedding ceremony 2. You can put a full stop after 8:00 pm and start a new sentence saying, " The venue is Hotel Hyatt Regency Udaipur" 3. Wedding ceremony will take place 4. Join us for the Vidai
Regards

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