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Solution

Such questions are made for enhancing self-creative skills and should be tried

answering on your own. However, here are a few points that will help you in framing

your answer:

Corrections are as follows:
- Comma after opening word/phrase in a sentence- for example: after 'once upon a time'.
- Use 'much' for quantity- much food.
- hibernating (instead of hibernate)
- Comma to separate clauses- for example: after 'before hibernating'.
- The clues mention 'villager', so specify one villager who took it home.
- touch (instead of touched)
- Divide the story into three paragraphs (introduction, body conclusion)
- Moral: Look before you leap.

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