please check this answer from the chapter my mother at sixty six - English - Poem Composition

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please check this answer from the chapter my mother at sixty six

Sucheta Priyadarsini Sahu · Accepted Answer

Dear Student,

Please make the following corrections:
line 3 - her approaching end
line 3 - The winter is the last season of the year
( eliminate the double the )
The moon, just like life, becomes faded and
loses its radiance and vitality during winter Thus
the winter's moon can be compared to the poet's mother's life as
the poet's mother has also lost her health, texture and
radiance

Regards,

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