please check this answer from the chapter my mother at sixty six

Dear Student, 

Your answer is good. However, please make the following corrections:
line 5 - situation ( not situations - Since we are talking about her mother's specific situation i.e old age )
line 5 - eliminate bore ( write: The children represent the beginning of new life )
line 9- old, fatigued and corpse-like

Regards,
 

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