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Please check this answer from the rattrap

Anushka Singhal · Accepted Answer

Dear student, Your answer is correct, however, there are a few
grammatical changes which will make your answer perfect: (1) First
line 'sign' - 'signed'; (2) Second line 'as' - 'because'; (3) Third
line 'ever after' - 'even after'; (4) Sixth line 'thinkings' -
'thinking'; (5) Seventh line 'a educated' - 'an educated'

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