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Dear Student, 

Your answer is very good. However, please make the following changes :
line 3 and line - When ( capitalise )
line 4- ,they were confused about what was to be done.
line 8 - for the sake of humanity
line 11 - fed ( and not feeded )
line 14 - another human-being ( not human-beings)
line 16- This shows that she was a selfless and caring person

Regards,