Please correct my mistake
Dear Student,
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What do you mean by war? According to me, war only means killing and destroying lakhs of beautiful lives without any personal reason. Two soldiers from different nations killing themselves for their nation should be respected by people because they sacrifice their lives in the spirit of patriotism. But did a single soldier ever think why they kill their opponents? ''Is he really my enemy? Keeping in mind my nation, he is. But if he too is a patriot, then should I kill him?''
Now in India, every single citizen wants war and revenge for the Pulwama attack. I know how gloomy the windows of the soldiers killed in the attack must feel. Maybe I don't understand the pain of losing a son, a brother, or a husband. But Indian citizens need to understand this, and stop pressurizing the government for war. In Pulwama attack, around 40 CRPF soldiers were killed. But in war, more than 40 lakh soldiers will have to sacrifice their lives. Again, wives will be widowed, mothers will lose their hopes in life. And the children whose fathers enageged in war- who will take care of them? Who will give them the love of a father?
Please don't think that I am anti-national. Think about the heavy loss of lives that can again happen in war. I only want to appeal to the government and to our respected prime minister, Modi ji, to work according to the conditions, to take decisions which are in favour of humanity. Think about whether you would want war if your father was in the army.
Regards
Here is the edited passage:
What do you mean by war? According to me, war only means killing and destroying lakhs of beautiful lives without any personal reason. Two soldiers from different nations killing themselves for their nation should be respected by people because they sacrifice their lives in the spirit of patriotism. But did a single soldier ever think why they kill their opponents? ''Is he really my enemy? Keeping in mind my nation, he is. But if he too is a patriot, then should I kill him?''
Now in India, every single citizen wants war and revenge for the Pulwama attack. I know how gloomy the windows of the soldiers killed in the attack must feel. Maybe I don't understand the pain of losing a son, a brother, or a husband. But Indian citizens need to understand this, and stop pressurizing the government for war. In Pulwama attack, around 40 CRPF soldiers were killed. But in war, more than 40 lakh soldiers will have to sacrifice their lives. Again, wives will be widowed, mothers will lose their hopes in life. And the children whose fathers enageged in war- who will take care of them? Who will give them the love of a father?
Please don't think that I am anti-national. Think about the heavy loss of lives that can again happen in war. I only want to appeal to the government and to our respected prime minister, Modi ji, to work according to the conditions, to take decisions which are in favour of humanity. Think about whether you would want war if your father was in the army.
Regards