Pls find all the mistakes and tell some new words that can be used in this letter

Dear Student,
Make the following changes in your answer.
  • Please include the date after the Sender's address.
  • Your newspaper has great reputation among people.
  • ... decline of the moral values among teenagers.
  • Teenagers are the future of our nation.
  • (Don't say that western culture is the reason for the declining values)
  • Add: Our youth often tries to imbibe the western cultures and forgets our heritage and traditions.
  • In a teenager's life, the most essential and needed factors are discipline and respect towards elders.
  • In the ancient days, teachers were the role models for students.
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Youcan forgetthe, s and change the writing
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