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a. Did I tell you about Prakash, eh? He's my favourite cousin. He came to visit us last weekend from Jaipur. We had loads of fun when he was here. On Saturday we went over to Diya's house to play chess. Prakash is very good at chess; so is Diya. I thought they will be very happy to play together. After they finished two rounds, Prakash, Diya and I went to the park. We ate two ice creams each.
b. On Sunday we went fishing with dad to the river. Prakash didn't go fishing ever before. He was excited after reaching the spot. He went straight to the bank to play with the water. I followed him. We played for about half an hour. By that time dad already prepared the fishing instruments. Then we tried to learn a bit about fishing. Dad caught a couple of trout fish and some other fish I don't know the name of. We couldn't catch anything though. We came back home in the evening.
Regards
The changes are highlighted in bold -
a. Did I tell you about Prakash, eh? He's my favourite cousin. He came to visit us last weekend from Jaipur. We had loads of fun when he was here. On Saturday we went over to Diya's house to play chess. Prakash is very good at chess; so is Diya. I thought they will be very happy to play together. After they finished two rounds, Prakash, Diya and I went to the park. We ate two ice creams each.
b. On Sunday we went fishing with dad to the river. Prakash didn't go fishing ever before. He was excited after reaching the spot. He went straight to the bank to play with the water. I followed him. We played for about half an hour. By that time dad already prepared the fishing instruments. Then we tried to learn a bit about fishing. Dad caught a couple of trout fish and some other fish I don't know the name of. We couldn't catch anything though. We came back home in the evening.
Regards