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a. Did I tell you about Prakash, ehHe's my favourite cousinHe came to visit us last weekend from JaipurWe had loads of fun when he was here. OSaturday we went over to Diya's house to play chess. Prakash is very good at chess; so is Diya. I thought they will be very happy to play together. After they finished two rounds, PrakashDiya and I went to the park. We ate two ice creams each. 
b. OSunday we went fishing with dad to the river. Prakash didn't go fishing ever beforeHe was excited after reaching the spot. He went straight to the bank to play with the water. I followed himWe played for about half an hour. By that time dad already prepared the fishing instruments. Then we tried to learn a bit about fishing. Dad caught a couple of trout fish and some other fish I don't know the name of. We couldn't catch anything though. We came back home in the evening.
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