Written by me....................Experts please comment....................I usually write poems.................It is one of them
Friendship is a relationship,
It is old,
But shines like a gold;
That’s the story of friendship I told.
Neither to borrow nor to lend,
And, thus it never has any end.
More than my jewels, it is my friend,
Neither to repair, nor to mend.
Once we grow up,
Sharing our happiness and sharing our wealth,
It becomes the thing that balances our health.
Now can you understand,
Without friendship neither you can sit
Nor you can stand,
Then see, that it is the friendship,
The most precious thing in our hand.
Dear student,
I appreciate your effort and the poem is really nice. The thought is beautiful however, I would suggest you to re-work on the grammar of the poem to make it more appealing. Good luck!
Regards
I appreciate your effort and the poem is really nice. The thought is beautiful however, I would suggest you to re-work on the grammar of the poem to make it more appealing. Good luck!
Regards